Wow, that was beautiful, it seemed sort of unfinished though, but it flowed perfectly, and the words you used worked pefectly, 5/5
luv gabriella

I like this, I have a sister that is like this. It matches her perfectly.

Wow really good, short but powerful. the flow was great even though there was no ryhme scheme, and i loved the wording, you used a very advanced vocab, i liked it... not very unique, it was sort of a very monotonous poem, but i still liked it nice job 5/5

Ohh, I liked this. Very short, but extremely detailed. So much imagery was expressed throughout those short lines.

Nice work. 5/5.

Very good! i liked your choice of words

Oh wow. I loved this poem. It was just so dark and full of emotion. It left a shiver up my spine =P

The thing that really caught my eye was your use of words. The stanzas were beautifully written, with great emotion. I don't know what else to say, but that this poem is simply gorgeous. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Awwwwwwwww. very deeply written i loved it

Short and sorrowful...
Really good! :)