The dream line from the other poem would fit better here. Interesting poem. I like this one a lot. You use simple rhymes, but your ideas, phrases, are original.

I feel like I am just repeating myself, but this is once again another wonderful poem, I love the last part, about how behind every fear is a dream that has died, I know what its like to have a heart full of fear.

This is a very powerful poem...
You should hang on to your dreams tightly, and pursue them with everything you have in you. Fears may try to come and take them away, but don't let that stop you, always hold your dreams close to your heart.

It's a very good poem you have there, though...

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