Beautifully penned. There are several grammatical errors, but nothing too bad. Great writing. Your emotions are strong.

So far I have enjoyed everything you have writen, Its amazing how much just one day can change how you feel or your believes. I don't love everyone yet, but I have learned not to hate anymore... well... not everyone...

A really beautiful and inspiring write. the flow and rythm are flawless and the meaning of it is full of truth and hope. i love the style you write in. a truelly beautiful write! keep it up! xXx