Great write. artistic much. although there were a few grammar mistakes as there are in most poems (even mine) i think angle was meant to be angle and i think maybe lose was meant to be lost. anyway, your poem, in my opinion, lacked depth. I felt that you were holding back something. Don't do that; Give it your all! anyway overall 4/5...your well on your way to being a great poet.

Angle was meant to be angel* lol i told you i make mistakes

And in the title your should be you're...i think im on a grammar frenzy today....you can tell me all about how i can't spell too; i don't mind.