Comments : Baby Listen...

  • 17 years ago

    by HE.says.SHE.says

    And I'm Glad That You Are Trying Sweetheart. 5 out of 5 dear.

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    An excellent read! Do you regulary upload poems? Thats great more readin pleasure for me! :) Thank you for adding me to your favourites, i added you yesterday as well. Lol. Anyways this poem was brilliant! You kept me engaged form the first line and i loved the ending:
    "But baby listen, I won't take you back..."
    It was such a strong and powerful conclusion. I really loved it. I loved your punctuation in this one, i love the fact your using it more now. Good rhyming that didnt seem forced. Overall a really enjoyable read. Keep it up, i look forward to reading more! xx