I liked it. Although I think it could of been structured differently. Other than that it was a wonderful poem. Full of emotion.
Good job 5/5

:Sarah:

It was a pretty good poem. It didn't really flow that well. It was more of a meaningful poem with a message in it. There were some good lines in this one, but nothing amazing. I'll give you a 5 because I'm nice, but it really does deserve a 4 :(

Beautiful! so true. i can relate!

But she stays silent. Releasing her pain with a bloody kiss on her wrist.

i love those lines! they are so true!

xo kisses xo

I liked this poem, so so much. I just got over a guy. lol and I thought it would take a long while. ohh it did. but than I realized something and I don't like him anymore. I guess it's something you have to hit head on and just go for what you want. 5/5

I'll admit. Not the best poem.
It was just a mess to me. I think you should
just keep your stanzas the same lines and same use of words as possible. The flow wsa pretty rocky. Was good but not the best. God Bless 4/5
<3Tay

Absolutely brilliant.. vry deep n full ov meaning.. this kind ov thing happenz so much.. it isnt a great feeling at all n u hav expressed it vry well..

5/5

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