WOW great poem shanik

Loved the rhyming, 5/5 really effective

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You did an awesome job i could feel the emotion in it as i read, but it was very sad. 5/5

Omg this is a awesome poem very well writin... You can really feel your pain and most people dont do that good job keep it up...

Hey the comment that says shannon thats me but ya great poem

Ignore that

This is shannon lol my name didnt change before thats why i said never mind but now it is