Its priviledge to read your poem once again.
I love the selection of words in your poems, they really add beauty to your emotions.
Very well written.

Best wishes,
chavii.

Nicely written sad poem Cindy.....I like your happy love poems so much better. I realize emotions ebb and flow....hope your sad ones soon disappear again. Love your sis, Debbie

Oh Cindy, this makes me sad. Hey, tomorrow is the first day of spring and hopefully new happy feelings.
I'm thinking of you. Take care.

Yeah, I can feel you. Sad but great poem.

This is a very good poem cindy, sad but very good, give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Wow. I wanted to cry. honestly. My boyfriend and I broke up today and that's how I feel. I love it and hate it at the same time because of the sadness yet it...I can really relate to it.

Sarah

"Feelings that dwell inside of me
Not knowing when they'll surface"

This is what haunts me quite often. The feelings that control my thoughts and actions. Sometimes, It's all I can do to hold back the reaction to something that has hurt or angered me.

The flow was subperb. You did a wonderful conveying the emotons of this write.

Always,
Jeannie

Oooo it's so sad, life without you a wonderful ending to a dramatic and intense piece, xox sam *hugs*

Doesn't matter where I turn
The ending is always the same
Heartache and pain at every turn
Guess I just can't play the game

first stanza itself says it all, u r so talented..i guess it would be wise to say that ur soul is so poetic & it just doesnt matter what u want to write abt coz everything comes from ur poetic heart.

all the best and take care

I am sorry for all your loses in life, but from the looks of it, the one thing you could never lose is your talent for writing.

Good write cindy. try to keep searching for joy in this oppresive life. 5/5 from me

Wow this poem is amazing! i love it. it definetly gets 5/5 from me!

Nothing is lost.....