Gem, I always look forward to your poems. Here's one that I've wondered many times but was afraid to ask him. He thinks I complain enough.
Great co-write.
5/5

Gem
This poem sings of love.

Despite being the perfect guy
I guess this time it is goodbye
There's times when love has had its run
A gray cloud covers up the sun

Treasure these times.
Take Care Love Cindy

Very touching poem, speaks your heart well.You guys have done good job.

Thanks for your comment, really appreciate it.
Regards
--chavii--

I loved it. The flow was excellent and it was full of emotion.
I wish you's all the luck.
Good job 5/5

:Sarah:

I guess in a way we all miss certain parts of our old relationships but then again im glad the old ones are gone in the end im better off :) now this is miss the most
"When I'm gone will you miss how
I used to kiss your lips
The way I'd pull you close to me
With my hands upon your hips?"
this poem gets 5/5 Gem as always :))

Awwww....very sweet. A lot of good questions posed and a sweet ending. You two always do so nice together.
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Charisma*

Gem. you still amaze me.
I've missed your poems so much.
I've just been so pre-occupied with school and everything.
I've forgotten to make poems and check out yours.
You're still just as amazing =]

This is simply so cute, so wonderfully written piece, simply beautiful

When I'm gone will you miss "us"
And the relationship we had?
All the memories we shared
Will you miss them like mad?

just loved this one spl...keep writing dear

all the best and take care

Aww i really liked this one. it was a very heartfelt poem. great use of words. i loved it. xx

Awww this is cute i like this. 5/5

Bautiful love poem.... All the wonderful emotions it portrays....sings of love!

Nicely done both of you! All the best, Debbie

Wow i luved it so amazing

When I'm gone will you miss me
And the love we had together?

you love is two sided. so definitely she will miss you alot.. you showd the example of gr8 love take care

Wow. This is a very sensual poem. I loved reading it. Great Job!

Wow, a very beautiul poem! I just love it. It is great and wonderful.

Hey , im sure you get a bunch of comments on this poem but i just wanted to say that its an amazing poem and your a really good writer, i love all of your work. keep it up! if u get a chance, check out some of mine. thanx
~Whittney~

Amazing poem I am so happy for u that u have found that some1 special and u can share your writing with them some 1 to do that with is a rare find congrats