Excellent write girl beautiful imagery

This is so sweet, 5/5 it flowed gorgeously, and it was such a beautiful love poem
gabriella

Oh wow very descriptive i loved this piece you showed your love strongly I loved this piece

''Never leaving my side
You are treasure
My gorgeous possession
Ruled by love and care
You will always be there''

This was my favourite part, I found it beautiful.
I think you did a great job with this, the imagery was beautiful and though each stanza had different syllable counts or different forms, I thought you managed to keep the flow beautiful.

That must have been tough to write, but you did a great job on it nonetheless, I really like your work you have a unique talent and I think that you can go far with it. =)