Ok big help...thanks..lol...j/k maybe someone will help......... =o)

You know I love all your poems ;) And I love this one! Keep up the great writing. As for a title maybe "What Am i Suppossed to Feel?" I just liked that line alot in the poem. Its just a suggestion. And its great even without a title so dont worry about it to much!

Hey Kristin. A great poem you got here. You expressed yourself clearly in this piece. Hope things will soon turn out for the better. You have great talent. Keep up the excellent work. By the way, thank you for commenting on my latest poem. I really appreciate it. Take care.
Kristina

Thanks to everyone who commented...it means a lot to me. Thanks for the suggestions mary and jesse. I went with within a wall...first verse and I didn't even think about it. Thanks again everyone... =)

hey~u commented on one of my poemss... and i think this one is almost based on the same thing that one poem i wrote is!
i wrote mine when things got tough with my boyfriendd.. but right now- things are greatt.. couldnt get better..
so if this really is happening- it'll get better~ ;) keep writing! ur good!