This was great. the word choice was excellent as usual. i loved this poem. this dark and spooky poem, well done!

5/5 always, david

A beautiful poem, very nicely written. keep up the great job. a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

This poem is amazing!! it was beautifully written and flowed amazingly! loved it!

This was interesting; somewhat unique. I liked the repetition of "But still I..." It was a dark poem, but with some positivity seeping through. I also really liked the imagery created.

Nice work.

Wow I think WOW. You expressed emotions incredibly and created superb atmosphere. Simply amazing... Flow is great and you wrote it excellently. Well done! I am impressed, you deserves 5/5