Nice job
This was a good poem
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Well i liked it more than the member b4. i gave you a 5/5, like always. this poem was written perfectly.

5/5 david

Nice! Very unique style of writing.. :)

Wow! This poem kept me captivated right from the beginning to the end... Amazing choice of words and enchanting flow of words... The image potrayed in the poem is intense with great imaginary...

a soft tongue of warmth
pale skin
a structure so simple, so common
yet causes the birth of complex and cruel feelings

Great work! 5/5 from me...

Wow! Fantastic! ^^ 5/5 Once again!

~Ally