Comments : Off Her Feet

  • 17 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    There is so much passion and vivid detail that it makes the reader feel as though they are there experiencing it with you. However, as the poem goes on the strength of the structure fades.

    {4/5}

    [PygmyPuff]

  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    This crazy world has tainted my innocence beyond belief (My favorite part of the poem.)