OMG! im sooo glad u posted this poem! i love it because it is so gripping and it just makes me want to keep reading to see what happens next. some quite long poems like this 1 get a tad boring half way through but this one held my attention right to the firm ending at the end.
the ending was really powerful, but sad.
this poem is full of so much feeling, i luv it so much! it was AWESOME
definitely 5/5 (i wish i could rate higher lol)

~BRiDDY~