Ben
Wonderful piece. The word choices are great! The way you can make the reader think of things is truely amazing.

We never know which breath we take will finally be our last.
So live each moment the best you can, leave sadness in the past.

How true this is.
Thinking of you
Cindy

This was a great poem. Very well written.

Nicely written.....good flow and great message....

We never know which breath we take will finally be our last.
So live each moment the best you can, leave sadness in the past.

Awesome last lines! Debbie

Ben beautifully written with a message I fully understand...the last two line sting.
I also appreciate very much your comment.
Life is short....it is what we do with it that counts... thoughtful poem with wisdom!!!