What a picture this paints in the mind. Very visual piece.
Excellent writing.

Bolting across the midnight sky in lifeless animation.
Streaking through time's expanse toward eternal damnation.

Great job.
Take Care Cindy

Wonderful poem!It makes you want to imagine what its like.keep up the good work!

Rebecca

Very well penned, the imagery and description all makes it superb dark poem.

Nice dark poem... Very well described... Great work!

Excellent vampire verse!

Now as a minion of darkness I amble through the night.
Wielding my immortality I steal souls with my bite.

Very scary......Excellent rhyming and flow. Debbie

You really seems to have so much inside you am glad you found this site to release...this is pretty dark indeed.

all the best and take care