Comments : Love -- Lust {Diamante}

  • 17 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    The downward spiral of love. You portrayed it well from the center of a line where a turning point appeared. try making it into a diamond shape to add more of an effect : )

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    So at first glance, I thought this was just a string of descriptive words, but then I realized the evolution of it. Amazing style, I really liked this! So what classifies this poem as "diamante"?