Such dark and inviting, loved this poem. the flow was magical. yes, magical and dark!

5/5 David

Hey hey! i think that was very good. awesum job!!!

Wow intense and i love how you use your stanzas and make them stick out...

(example)No longer left in the dark-
-ness-
On my own
loving you: a weakness i'll never show

great stuff, definatly keep writint and never give up. best of luck.

melissa