Comments : Captivating Eyes

  • 16 years ago

    by naina

    U call this shit .....o god.....its so beautful and wow what feelnz u have expressed....kp up the guuuuuuud wrk dear

  • 16 years ago

    by Somber Esprit

    Hey, that's a pretty cute poem! i know what you mean... i always get hopelessly lost in my bf.'s eyes... (umm... thought you might like to know... last line of 2nd stanza, i think 'and' is meant to be 'an'...)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    Well I Liked It!

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Very nice. and it is so true. always gettin lost in my bf's eyes...congrats!

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    This is really sweet. def not sh-t!