Nice emotion, and flow.. great poem.

Very good poem ;D

David....i REALLY LIKE IT!!!! ur an awesome writer!! <3
amanda

That was a nice poem with a unique style.

Full of emotion, very nice poem.
That's all I can say about this poem.
Keep it up!

Thanks for the comment. Nice piece you got here by the way. 5/5

I loved this, it was such a great write, filled with so much emotion and I thought the way you wrote it was original and unique.
I thought the flow worked very well.
You did a wonderful job with this.

Wow... great write as always David.. I love it... so well spoken, ok, written, lol. Flow and choice of words was wonderful as well!! The emotions were clearly present in the one.. 5/5 my friend
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.