Comments : If You Were Here

  • 17 years ago

    by Bri

    I wrote this for a special someone

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww thats sooo goood, well done xxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Beautiful poem. Awesomely written and great grammar.
    This poem speaks to me, and is very thought-provoking and inspirational in a writing sort of way.

    just to let me know you are real, = personally, i'd change that to "that you're"

    Just my opinion though.

    Great poem. Loved it!
    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Beautiful poem. Awesomely written and great grammar.
    This poem speaks to me, and is very thought-provoking and inspirational in a writing sort of way.

    just to let me know you are real, = personally, i'd change that to "that you're"

    Just my opinion though.

    Great poem. Loved it!
    5/5
    ~Stephen White