An amazing piece very refreshing and love the flow of this great great job.cant wait to read more.

melissa.

Your flow is impeccable as always.
You're very talented to be able to churn out poetry such as this.
The words, the emotion, everything was excellent
Keep writing!
5/5
*Gem*

AWWWWWWWH
This has to be one of my favourites by you!
The first stanza was such a great opening and from then it just kept getting better.
I thought this was beautifully written, as always.

Those words are so nice to hear. i love you. makes you all fuzzy inside. don't you think. well done with this. the words clearly showed so much emotion.

5/5 David

Aww i absolutely loved this poem. it was so beautiful a very heartfelt piece!! great job keep em coming xx

Those words can turn our worlds upside down. Great job on this. 5/5

The poem describes a honest and true love, beautifully penned.

This piece reminds me very much of my boyfriend and I at this moment. He has recently gone into the army and I am missing him. This piece helped me out today. Thank you.

Very very stron love feeelings and symboles reflects in your poem gr8 job take care

I really enjoyed this poem, I hope the one that I love and inspires me feels this way too. Good write, thank you for sharing it with us.
tom