Comments : All I Ever Wanted

  • 14 years ago

    by Kelsey

    Awww...Jeni, that's a beautiful poem!

    love ya always and forever,

  • 14 years ago

    by Christina

    That was very impressive i like it
    * thanks for commenting*

  • 14 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    What a beautiful poem! Brought tears to my eyes. Nice job!


  • 14 years ago

    by just me

    Yot are very very talented. Very nice. Looks like you may be becoming one of my favs.

  • 13 years ago

    by Dustin S

    Awesome poem! 5/5!

  • 13 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Okay i'm gonna be a bit critical here, the structure, lay it out properly, its too hard to get lost when your reading it :[

    wanna is not in the dictionary- its i want to, also punctuation can go an awful long way if you want to advance your work.

    i do have to say, and its the kind of little thing i'd give my other half, just to cheer them up. parts made me giggle and parts made me said, and alot of it made me go awww thats cute.

    you could probally use different words its a bit simple. but overall the concept is really thoughful and really nice, just a little bit of work needs done. i don't want you to take all them things i said up there wrong- the poem is good :]