This was completely breathtaking. probably one of the most emotional pieces i have ever read. i feel your pain also, but not quite as severely. somebody very close to me came near to suicide once, and i understand how frustrating it is thinking that you didn't do anything, and i know hwo angry you can get. and i truly am sorry for your loss. but my god, this was a freaking amazing poem...
This is a good poem. You expressed your feelings extremely well. Keep writing your heart out. Those poems make for the best. E>
I'm sorry to hear about your friend. Losing someone you care about is always tough. Especially if you lose them to death, suicide. I've never been through something like this personally, but I can imagine it's h e l l.
I don't think you should hold such a hate-filled grudge torward your friend.. try to forgive them. I know it's difficult, but you shouldn't remember them by their suicide. Remember them by all of the good memories.
And if you have cut yourself, and thought about suicide because of what happened.. please, stop and think again. Would you want your family and friends going through what you're going through now? Would you want them holding this same type of grudge against you? Think about it.
I'll stop rambling now. Sorry. ;P
If you ever need to talk, pm me.
Dang man that poem was a tear dropper but i cant believe that your happy your friends gone that jus aint right, your friend seemed to have alot of pain inside of 'em and they jus couldnt take it no more, so you being her friend and all you should of atleast understood why your friend did what they did...think about it you may change your mind
im out peace
Well i normally hate the people that are like "hey i know what your going through you can talk to me" but for this one i really do know what it's like... but i am not going to say you can talk to me cause quite frankly well you probably couldnt.... it would kill me... i cant talk to anyone else about it and im assuming you cant really either! So i love this poem... and it makes me want to reply to his note... but im really not sure what to say! I hope all looks up for you soon!
Your poem is very touching and i hope that you can show this to everyone, more for as long as you live.you are a talented and one day this will be worth writing it.this poems touched me very cuz my sister died of Leukemia in the year 97 when she was around 17 years of age.life can be a b****.excuse my foul language.though this is very excelent and therefore i give you a 5!keep it up and be well!
Omg hunny that was so sad im literally crying!!! im so sorry for u nd how hard that must have been, to loose ur best friend nd feel that way towards her...an excellent poem i felt as if i were u, well done 5/5
luv FallenxFromxGrace xoxo