I read all the parts and i think it s a nice poem(s). it funny b/c i have a guy friends i call him my BGF (best guy friends) and he love me but i don't. i love a other guy and yet my BGF always tells me to try to talk to him but i don't.

Wow...i read at the parts...and i love it!!....plz keep ritting

Wow, it was amazing, i like how you told about how maybe the luckiest guy in the world not has the girl that you had or had wanted, very nice, 5/5

Overall not bad. not as good as some of the others, but it still rocked. =]

Heres one problem:
In your love she forgot everything,
Even my purest love.
How come now you are the one
Making her life so tough.

Love and Tough do NOT rhyme! it throws off the whole poem. it makes you seem so -Well i dnt know what to say, or what words to use so hmm lets throw this in' i think you should be able to compile that stanza better.

Also-
Why have you done that to her?
Don't you have a heart too?
How could you give her fake hopes?
By the drama of "I love you"

the beats of the 2nd and 4th line dont mesh. when you read it you trip over yourself to find the rhythm. try rereading it and you will see what i mean.

Overall a 4. it needs some fine tuning. =]

What a jerk.

one day your princess will see,
the amazing guy you shall be.

Hey goran. this poem is really amazing! you are a very talented person and this girl you talk of is missing out on just how amazing you are! thanks for the comment! i love your work!

I Wanna say that i really love ur poems all of them
and this poem is the poems which descripes my lates love :)
ur doing a great job keep going

Whoa, Goran it's like you are tell my life story but much better then I could ever do.

These poems have been great. This one I think was the strongest of them all. You obviously really care about this girl. You wrote 5 poems everyone being strong and with alot of love, these poems show everyone just how strong one can be. To go through heartbreak, grieving, acceptance and yet to still care when everthing is said in done... thats true love.

Awwww!!! this series of poems are wonderful. i hope that you can write a sixth one! these are beautiful!

xo kisses xo

Wow that was really pretty and amazing, it gave me chills. Really good story poems.

I've voted 5/5 on all of these. =)

~*Alex*~

Sooo sad there are parts of me that feel eactly what you have written but other parts where it makes me feel something new and great.......goood job
5/5
laura

Wow i just read 1,2,3,4,and 5 they r amazing poems with such feeling and emotion. i really loved them. It told a story about how much loave a person could give to another. Great job and good luck with ur selling of ur 2nd book. i am hoping one day I can write a book i am working on it. You are a wonderful writer the best of luck luv Brittany

I have read all of the parts and i can only say "you are a talented poet"

Filled with so much emotions so said but so good at the same time good job keep it up

This poem was sweet and sad at the same time. Nice write<3

I really love it.. It was great! Keep up the good work! 5/5 for your poem

I love...LOVE these poems.... I read all of them and all of them are so great... Keep up the good work. 5/5

xoxoxo
Jess

Amazing just like the other four. are you going to make a sixth?

Hi Goran,

I think I had 2 write this one. Frankly speaking I became a fan of yours when you wrote The Luckiest Guy part 1. But slowly slowly it just started to fade. Not because the rest were bad, but they could create on impact on my heart. And then you wrote part 4 and 5. I must tell you that you proved me wrong. You aint a 'one poem wonder'. Thanks for proving me wrong. Because it may feel good 2 be defeated by better ones but I feel gr8 to be defeated by my friend....

Take care. And keep writing.