Comments : Not the game

  • 14 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Monopoly as a metaphor, interesting. Not sure what else to say as you didn't want comments (or you won't listen to them) and I don't want to waste my breath...

  • 14 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    The structure of this one is perplexing. The lines in the middle leave me to wonder if it is finished.



  • 14 years ago

    by David

    Yeah the middle para sucked! two lines just broke the whole thing up.

    but i liked the rest. 5/5 David

  • 14 years ago

    by Kaila

    Oh wow very original! you did an excellent job!