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by N J Thornton
Monopoly as a metaphor, interesting. Not sure what else to say as you didn't want comments (or you won't listen to them) and I don't want to waste my breath...
The structure of this one is perplexing. The lines in the middle leave me to wonder if it is finished.
Yeah the middle para sucked! two lines just broke the whole thing up.
but i liked the rest. 5/5 David
Oh wow very original! you did an excellent job!