I really understand this poem, cause im going through some things with my boyfriend that makes me just want really want to let go. check out some of my poems if you wanna

Wow, i really like how you put this one together. It touched me a lil. Made me think about some things...thanks.

Wow... I Can Really Relate..
Its Great, Keep It Up xxxx

Absolutely wonderful...
keep on writing...

*isabel*

I lovee lovee lovee it

This was a pretty good poem, the flow was great and the repetition was very very good.Though, I think you should put it in stanzas' it would give it more structure. But overall very well written and many can relate. Keep up the good work!! 5/5

Brilliant poem well done , excellent emotion for a 15 year old. keep it up , looking forward to a poem you write when you are in love. carlos