Comments : I wish....

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is a good poem. well done, its a good talent you are showing so keep it up. hope you are ok. take kare xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Hey bby, thanks so much for the comments!
    This poem is really sad and very well written, i like your rhyming very much!
    love Steph