Comments : Defeat

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is a good poem. well done, its a good talent you are showing so keep it up. hope you are ok. take kare xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    WOW.
    i hope none of this is about me calling you mr.slutty :P
    it's a really good poem though.
    your kind of surprising in a way.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Excellent work
    =-)
    5/5
    Ur a very good writter