Sucidide has pride. so much of it. but you know. it varies with each person. this poem was interesting. the last line was very deep of meaning. thats wat i loved the most. the last line.

5/5 david

The last line made this poem.

it is well written. rhyming did seem a tiny bit forced in a couple of parts but overall the words were well chosen.

A good poem with a good moral.

Thank you for your comments. Means alot!

Jemma

Great work you have put together here, I know someone is feeling this cause I am.

This is really good !!!

I wish my cousin heard this...
:,(

5/5

Amazing poem
Really strong. Keep it up. Good message that many people should pay attention to.
-C.P.-

Again, a wonderful meassage. I love how all of your poetry is so meaningful. I think the flow of this piece was flawless. 5/5

marcella

Good
the rhyming made it work!!
good job

<3 i love you silly