I really like this poem. It has lots of feeling, passion and component that work together to make this poem really special and well done. Great job!

Thanks for the post and I accept the offer! Great poem by the way! 5/5

I liked this one! It held such a strong message!
I think a lot of people on this site will be able to relate to this kind of situation.
Great job at putting it into words!
5/5
*Gem*

Okay well for starters, in the 3rd stanza you put you, when I think you meant to put your*.

"Guessing you intentions,
Your notions,
Your heart."

I can understand how you feel here. I can tell that you are trying to let out a very strong emotion, almost like grieving, so when you wrote this I don't think you were really ready to write it yet. But I like what you had to say. I think the flow was off because your stanzas were unorganized, and that took allot from it. The ending also, doesnt really end. You dont have an ending rhyme that would connect the pieces. But I do like how you were repetetive with "love or a lie". Other then that it was okay. But I think you should have rewritten it after your heart ache was over, because it is just as useless as going out with a guy as a rebound, when you write poems when you are goiong through something dramatic. Im sure you have better work. I get like that too. If Im too upset my poems dont sound right. But I think you should keep working with it. I have given you my honest opinion. You may think "why should I listen to a 15 year old?" and right you are but it is your choice to take the advice aint it? Well thank you for commenting me.

God bless

~skittles

Very good poem, it had a strong message and I really enjoyed it good work.
Thanks for commenting on my poems.

I liked this poem. It is well written, the flow is pecfect, and it is well penned. The emtion is strong and raw. Excellent word choice. Keep up the good work. 4/5

I really liked this the flow was good and the idea itself was good I just thing that you should use more metaphores in your poems and it would sound better.

Very powerful. I really liked this, at first it didn't quite draw me in but it got me near the middle. I usually HATE questions in a poem, but for this particular piece..they worked. Great job.

"Will you make me regret,
Ever looking in your eyes?"

^^ That question, in itself, is what made me really love this poem. It was amazing, I don't know what else to say about it.

5.5

Wow this poem is so powerful and has such great emotion. i love this poem so much. i think it is on of the best i've ever read. great work.5/5

I really liked this....there was just so much depth and emotion flowing through the words...
I thought the ending was beautiful, it was very intense and hard hitting, yet also filled with hope.

WOW.. very touching.. and yet so blunt.. sorry Im sooo tired. but uhh I really like your choices of words it tells who you are

I really like your peom. it really sad. this peom is very powerfully!! 5/5

Aw, that poem was well planned, the words fit in perfectly with each other creating a heart tugging poem, 5/5

Sometimes i wonder the same thing about my girlfriend but i hope what shes tellin me is not a lie. i guess i can relate to the poem (at the beggining) 5.5

Great job!! i really like it!