Comments : 3 Haiku's

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    I love those haiku's. I think they are great. You definately know how to write poetry. I enjoyed reading this and it was very well written. Keep it up. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I liked these 3 they were very well written and I can tell you put a lot of effort into them

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I love Haikus in general. They are always a pleasure for me to read, and yours were no different.

    Very nice.

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Lovely really. with so few words you were quite expressive love.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    I liked the Haikus. They followed the structure well, however, the first one wasn't really that good. It seemed really random, and had no real purpose.

    Haikus are really suppose to be poems about nature. Senryu on the other hand.. is written about the other topics.

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    These were really great haikus, I especially liked the second one. I've tried doing one and I got frustrated and stopped lol. Anyways keep it up!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    I loved that last one! It seemed so peaceful and relaxing.
    Excellent ending!
    5/5
    *Gem*