I really liked that, i think at time we all feel like that..=))

Wonderful poem. I really liked it:) What girl dosn't want some of those things:) 5/5

Butterfly's = butterflies

This piece is quite beautiful. On the whole, it seems like a prose poem. The fact that you've written a rather mesmerizing prose is terrific. I like that. Keep it up!

Debbie

Wow. I really enjoyed reading through this poem. It was well written and the content was beautiful. I loved every second of it.

Take Care - Sole.

Again a wonderful written poem, but the structure is off, break it into stanzas, it will flow much better and the strucutre will be better as well. Over all I loved your wording.

Peace, Joe

Beautiful write 5/5