Gem that is awesome girl !
I am so excited to read part 2.
Wonderful read sweets. See you at part 2

Holy Snap =)!! That Was So Long It's Not Even Funny, But Then Again, It Was Worth It To Read, Let The Words Inside Your Soul Keep On Coming =)

Bernadette.C. 5/5

Gem
Great job!
Take Care Love Cindy

Can i have two cookies. i didn't think it would be that long. lol. well done on it.

keep writing. and eating cookies. 5/5 David

Ohhhhh this is soooooo cute

Ok i finished readin it and now im about to go to part one and two and by this one i know its going to be good.5/5

That was awesome babe!!!! Keep up the awesome work!!!!! 5/5

I knew already the story of the little mermaid but i did not yet read in poetry version... well its nice... keep a ood work

Nice job putting the story in poem form!

These are great. you did a wonderful job with this! It's so cool that you picked this version. it was the one I always read when i was a little girl. Yea sry TMI. Good job!

This was an excellent poem i am off to read part 2 and 3