Bravo, Gem. Well done. Quite an imagination. A very beautiful Ballad.

I liked how you ended it. Not the norm.

I would like Oreos, please.

Always,
Jeannie

Little mermaid is my fav disney princess, its so good to read her story in form of beautiful poem .Very well written,you done full justice to real story.

Take care
chavii.

Gem what a creative twist in the ending.

With a piece of this length it is very hard to keep a reader's attention .... but you had my attention from beginning to ending words.
Excellent write Gem ! You should be so very proud of yourself.

Gem
You did a great job on your three part verse'
Excellent!
Take Care Love Cindy

Oh well done on this part too. i loved it just like i loved the other part.

long yet beautiful. elegant and perfect in every way!

5/5 David

Wow what and amazing and heartful poem. to turn that story into such depth and meaningful ryhiming words that must take a lot but you did an excellent job. That fairy tale is one of my favourites and to have done what you did to that story, i would never be able to do. EXCELLENT job gem!
5/5
xx.chelsea.xx

This is a great poem.... well story it is really long but it was worthwhile cause it was good. 5/5 you are a really good writer and you should keep up the good work 5/5

The ending suprised me. This fairytale was excellent. You'd get a 10/5 if I could. I'm glad she didn't kill the prince. My daughter loved this too!

That was indeed a long story but worth the time
i really liked it, and i am so glad it wasn't like the Disney version
all in all this was a good write

Ok, I finally got through the whole thing. Yes, it was long but it definitely kept my interest.
Absolutely incredible.

Well done trilogy!!!! Really enjoyed it.....

I have seen this movie b-4 it makes me cry everytime i love ur poems hey are very good

Excellent poem wow I flew through all 3 parts that is how well it flows together great job