This is a very good poem.
Your a good writer.
keep up the good work!!
5/5

~Chelsea

Amazing poem It highlights so many things that we all feal keep it up you have a gift.

Wow, i can really relate to this, you sure know how to express yourself in writing, this was beautiful, i hope you will be okay, 5/5 luv gabriella

This was really good...i liked it alot...especially the part about not liking the person you've become...i could relly feel your pain...great work...(although can you really call enjoyment work?)
Jonda Beth

Nicely written!! I liked the flow..god job..keep up the good write!

Wow thats really good :]
you are very talented
xx

OMG I love it! excellent work 5/5 keep it up ;)
xxdanixx

I keep repeating my self when I write comments for you however this is because all your poems are very beautiful and the emotion is very deep the sadness shines though and I can relate to your poems very well.
Your friend Adele

Well done, a very good write. It had good emotion and really moved me when I read it. Some of the wording could improve it but it was great!