Comments : Ice and Fire

  • 12 years ago

    by Cindy

    Rachel
    Your words ring so true! Excellent job!

    Follow your heart,
    It's not too late for a brand new start.
    Don't just settle, I'll make a bet,
    If you do you'll face regret

    Love this part.
    Love Aunt Cindy

  • 12 years ago

    by debbylyn

    We should always follow our hearts....life is too short. Nicely written and thought provoking!

  • 12 years ago

    by Yazdan

    Amazing poem, i love the way it flows so well. The only thing i could even think of as far as improvements go would be to mention fire and ice a bit more make some more connections. By the end i kind of lost the connection. Amazing poem btw, loved it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    The reference to fire and ice was a metaphor for two people being complete opposites.

  • 12 years ago

    by Gem

    Wow.. i could find lots of different meanings in this piece. i think this is one of my faves for some reason, lol
    It's brilliant, i love the hidden meanings!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 12 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Rachel
    How true your words are. I am so glad that I am with the one I love now. Makes such a diffrence.

  • 12 years ago

    by chavii

    Amazing write, a very strong message, if we follow our heart we never have to regret. 5/5

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kalgalath

    This is a really good poem. nicely written. applies to me much at the moment.

  • 12 years ago

    by Johnny Mac

    Nice job, really enjoyed reading it

  • 12 years ago

    by KARINA

    I like this poem and i felt as i was reading it that it was written with a true meaning behind iit...

  • 12 years ago

    by Amada

    I love it i know how you feel!

  • 12 years ago

    by Amada

    I love it keep going!

  • 12 years ago

    by Barry

    Mmmmm......

    Rachel
    love this message.....

  • 12 years ago

    by Jorge Luis

    Loved it!...Especially the title....