Cindy,

I wish i could express the amount of joy i had writing this one with you. Every stanza has a story behind it & our special moments. This is indeed something which would never leave our memories forever.

Looking back on our first date
Thought you'd get your way with me
Didn't count on buying me a ring
Before my goods I'd let you see

I still cant believe the way you trapped me here...lolol

all the best and take care

Great work both of you, i never seen such poem with dual narration , haha very sweet and cute poem, enjoyed it lot.

Cute and funny collaboration. I like the way you incorporated realistic feelings of the different age groups! Good job!

Very cute collab.....so true! Captures the growing up aspects from both sexes points of view....well done! Reminds me Cindy of a few of the boys we knew in the old neighborhood.

This poem gives me such hope Cindy since I'm 15 and havent even experienced love yet. Sometimes I see all these parents getting divorced and I think there is no true love anymore and I don't even want to get married, but this truly gave me hope. Whether it starts young, or you just meet someone, I guess their is real love out there somewhere! Excellent collab you too! Loved it!
Chelsey

I honestly have to say it sounds more like a love poem than a funny poem! 5/5

That was sooo cute!!!...i loved it!!...5/5 from me and could you comment my new poem "my one and only" thanks!!

Lol! This is so adorable. i love how you guys wrote this. And how it explains the changes in feelings as they grow older. I loved it so much! You guys are great writers together! 5/5

` Liz

Very sweet!

I read this on EOE site, and i said it was very well done and i'll say the same to you, its very sweet and a real love story, so cute hehe. well done on this one. PS i'm sorry to hear about your family, i iwsh you peace and happiness to come.

Oh my, thats amazing!
Two excellent poets combining their talents and emerging with this masterpiece!
Cindy, your amazing!
It was so cute and gorgeous!
Well done to the both of you!
5/5
*Gem*

Cindy
You and End Of Eternity do such a good job on these collabs. I hope the two of you keep writing together. Great poem. 5/5

That was so cute and so funny.
What a wonderful collaboration.
Excellent job.

Wow! rly liked it! just amazin!
i want a hot good guy to b my neighbor! =(

I loved dis poem.

Good job, thats a cute poem)

Awww...
That was so cute & adorable. And I agree with the others this poem was amazing & it had two great writers writing this one. =] Great job both of you!! =] 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

"I was a shy girl, only four
Dirt on his face, missing teeth"

i missed that first line there..so i had to keep re-reading it until i realized the age group , amazing work, a very hard theme to write on