Nitin
I had so much fun writing this with you.I can't remember a time when I laughed so much. This will be an experience I will never forget. You are such a good friend even with the dirt on your face.....hahaha.

The very first time i met him
I was a shy girl, only four
Dirt on his face, missing teeth
The worst thing he lived next door

A face you could fall in love with....lol
Such fun we had :)
Love your friend Cindy

Great work both of you, i never seen such poem with dual narration , haha very sweet and cute poem, enjoyed it lot.

Very cute collab.....so true! Captures the growing up aspects from both sexes points of view....well done!

Very cute collab.....so true! Captures the growing up aspects from both sexes points of view....well done!

As I said to Cindy. This was an excellent write. Love the concept of the children growing up and having those experiences. And it's something that happens a lot in life. I loved the beginning and the ending was perfect. Two talented writers created a brilliant piece of work! Never stop writing! 5/5

` Liz

Nice job on this collab. I like the way you guys kept the thoughts and actions of the age groups realistic. Cute and funny! 5/5.

A fantasic poem i loved it, it's so sweet, a real love story, well done xox sam

Oh my, thats amazing!
Two excellent poets combining their talents and emerging with this masterpiece!
It was so cute and gorgeous!
Well done to the both of you!
5/5
*Gem*

That was very sweet an entertaining

Man this was really good. You and Cindy really write well together. Everything just seems so natural. I hope the two of you do more of these wonderful poems. All my best. Ben

This was an excellent, funny collaboration. I really enjoyed it.
Great job.

I loved this poem. Please do mor poems like this. Two wondeful poets combining their magical and loving thoughts. Great job. ^^

Wow! great one there Nitin. you r great at collabs!
thanks a lot for your enquiries about my father. he is a lot better now.

peace
shobhana

This was so adorable!
I loved it!