I commented on hers. well done. the imaginary in this was great, the description even better.

5/5 David

You girls write well together. This is a very heartfelt write. One in which many can relate too. The rhyme and flow are perfect. Well done, keep on writing together.

Thats sooooooo sad!!!
i really LOVE your style of writing!
5/5
Keep it up!!!

Thats sooooooo sad!!!
i really LOVE your style of writing!
5/5
Keep it up!!!