Comments : To Be Touched.....

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, very beautiful and excellent poem! I loved it. It is just great.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very sweet. your beginning lines in every stanza and the word "liken" give this a shakespearian romantic feel. It is such a happy love poem. Very nice. I enjoyed your comments on my work and am always looking for feedback, whether it's on something to improve, edit, or just how you personally enjoyed the piece! Those little red numbers are always fun to have!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    This was a beatiful poem.

    To be touched by a special love,
    that has brought joy in all that I do.
    Is liken unto an Angels embrace,
    now that my heart is touched by you

    I really loved this stanza.
    Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    What a beautiful romantic poem! Love it....captures love in it's true essence.

    To be touched by a special love,
    that has brought joy in all that I do.
    Is liken unto an Angels embrace,
    now that my heart is touched by you.

    The last verse is just breathtaking. All the best, Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I love this...it's so beautifully written and the imagery used created vivid pictures for me.
    I thought the flow was flawless, and the first stanza was such a great opener and from there it just kept getting better.
    Wonderful work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Wow. Beautifully penned and absoultely romantic. Good word choice, flow and feeling from this piece!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a wonderful piece of poetry. Very heartfelt.

    To be touched by a kind loving heart,
    that has taught me all love can be.
    Is liken unto a beautiful spirit,
    that captured my love for eternity.

    Spoken from a heart that has known true love. Excellent :)
    Take care Cindy