Great job dude. 5/5
-vino

That was so great! i loved it... 5/5... and yes it is true love, because he gave the poem to me after we got in a little fight, and he said "this is the only poem Ive ever written, and your the first person Ive ever really loved, so I was doing for you..".... i was sooo happy!! haha..but yeah could you comment some of my other poems? thanks!

I liked it
5
SJ

Excellent poem, I especially liked the lines:

"Our lives always have a tribulation
to test our determination."

And the last verse, was very good aswell.
You got a way with words, very interesting.
Keep up the good write :)

5/5

xo angelique