A lovely written poem, i as you say enjoyed the old english, it adds something special, well done and please write more :)
ps. it pisses me off to

Omfg...I loved it! Haven't read any of your poems for a long time so this is an up for me. I am in school and so far this is the best thing I have heard all day!

Good job

Excellent poem, i really enjoyed it good work 5/5.

PS. plz comment and rate on my poems

It's excellent ! 5/5