Hey girl, thats really great... if you havnt thought of a titlle yet... think of why you wrote that song and what your feelings were when you wrote it. i honestly think that song is awsome.. great work, also i think that a good title would be holding on....... because in the corus you talk about holding on ok well im out.... good luck girly....
.xx.tash.xx.

Hmm..I'd like to hear this song. But good wording, good job.=) I think this is the last one I can comment on.. I believe I've read all the otehrs, so write more.lol
-Ally

I love the lyrics to this song. you did a great job writing it and should definetly keep up the great work! 5/5