Oh thats so sad. its very well writte, i love the last stanza, the last line is the title its just soo amazing, well done and keep writing xxxx

Thanks!

Wow i really like this it has a great flow nice job 5/5 keep it up!
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Thanks so much!!!!

Short but very good. The ryhming fit well and so didnt the whole meaning of the poem. Good job.. 5/5

Thank you!

Its straight. Keep it up.

Thanx.