Comments : Broken Dream

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww thats sad. good poem, you have a good talent here so keep writing. take kare xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    You will always have one friend. Great poem. 5/5
    -vino

  • 17 years ago

    by Fredy

    Really good poem, great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is so sad. Remember you are never alone.

    Is this how it will end?
    Tell me, will I ever have a friend?

    Your words bring tears to my eyes.
    You will find that special someone in your life.
    Take Care Cindy