Really like ur poem!!

~emS~

That was a little scary. Very nicely written.

Wow, the imagery created in this was amazing. I could vivedly picture what was being written clearly in my mind, as if I was there myself.

"Surroundings are just a blur
As I continue to speed on by
Want to curl up in a ball
No time to stop and cry."

-- Instead of using 'want' in line three, I would suggest saying 'wanting'. It sounds better, in my opinion. Or if you don't want to change 'want', you should put an 'I' before it.

Excellent work.

WOW this poem is crazy! and man did this really happen? wow u been threw alot! i like it alot! Duces Julez

Words cannot express how much I love your writing!
Rhythm easy to follow, rhyming is superb.
Heart stopping and filled with emotion.

5/5

Takes away my breathe once again.
Simply amazing.

5/5

Takes away my breathe once again.
Simply amazing.

5/5

Wow!!! i have chills! Very well written! Flawless flow. Fantastic!! 5/5

Josie

You actually had me scared for a minute lol. Again the flow was great and I loved the story behind it. Really didn't get what it was exactly about but I really enjoyed this poem I kind of made up my own story for it. Great job. 5/5

Wow really liked it....made me wanna keep reading good job! love the ending!
Elyse

Wow! This poem is SO unbelievably powerful! I mean that was just incredible. Absolutely wonderful job! I think I liked it the most because it was so to the point. There was no jumping around the subject, it was what it was. And for that, kudos to you! :) You are going in my favorites cause I really love your style! I can't wait to read more!
~Midnight Sun