The cubs play, run roughly, quickly round
As the snow falls lightly softly down

The ending is perfect, couldn had been better. Amazing write very creative.

Gem
How sweet a picture this paints. Good job!
Take care love Cindy

Wow
interesting
different!!

I have never seen this form before. Nice job conquering this as you do with the others. Interesting piece. Good job!

Amazing so different and great 5/5 love it