Very elegantly written in such a controlled way. I love it! I can't believe it's your first etheree, it seems as though you've written many... Well done!

Laura
What an uplifting Etheree ! Beautifully mastered and delightful.
What a wonderful poem to read this Easter morning ...
I am hoping we will get some of that beautiful sunshine today.

Take care and Happy Easter Laura
Luanne

This was beauuutiful!
I think you did an amazing job, especially for your first attempt.
I loved the imagery in this, it made me feel very relaxed and peaceful.

Very well done Laura. :-)

First attempt, eh? A first attempt gone terrible awesome!!!! I love this...GREAT STUFF LAURA!!! Your writing has definitely developed into something wonderful!!!

Beautiful poem, imagery is so powerful and you created wonderful atmosphere with so little words. I truly enjoyed in this piece, it is short but very effective and excellently written. Well done!